I learned you and your family go on long trips; I never got to do that as a kid. The best part of your story was the end when you are looking to the future. You may want to change the font size or slow it down because I didn't have time to read all the statements.
One thing I learned about you is that you played soccer and softball. Your family is different than mine because we have always lived in West Virginia. The best thing about your video is the pictures of your family. You can really tell how close your family is! The only suggestion I have is that some of the words go by to fast to read. It's a great video!
By looking at your pictures and reading your words I can see that you are very close to your family. I am the same way my family is the most important thing to me. I really liked everything about your video. The pictures and words fit perfectly together and the music just makes that much better. I would slow some of the slides down because by the time I finished reading the words I missed the pictures and had to go back. Also on some of the slides it was hard to read a couple words because of the color. (this could just be because of my computer) This is a really good video, great job!
One thing I learned about you is you love to travel. Your family is similar/different than mine because it seems that your family is fairly large. The best thing about your digital story is how strongly the importance of your family is portrayed. One think you could change is..I found a couple of words hard to read for some reason (perhaps the background).
One thing I learned about you is...”you were adopted from Mexico.” We always swore my sister was adopted too. Your family is similar/different than mine because...you live in the city and I live in the country. The best thing about your digital story is….the pictures. They are well suited for your poem. One think you could change is......a few of the words were hard for me to read.
One thing I learned about you is that you played soccer just like me. Your family is similar to mine because my family always traveled to different vacation destinations. The best thing about your digital story is the song. I love it. One thing you could change is that the first slide is hard to see.
One thing I learned about you played soccer and softball. Your family is different than mine because I didn't play soccer or softball. The best thing about your digital story is the great photos! The color on your favorite team's names made them difficult to read. Other than that, don't change a thing!
One thing I learned about you is that you were very athletic growing up! Your family is similar than mine because you all seem very close. The best thing about your digital story is the details and wording of your poem. It flows very well! One thing you could change in your video would be the introduction. I would add an introductory slide so it doesn't start right into your poem.
I learned you and your family go on long trips; I never got to do that as a kid. The best part of your story was the end when you are looking to the future. You may want to change the font size or slow it down because I didn't have time to read all the statements.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you played soccer and softball. Your family is different than mine because we have always lived in West Virginia. The best thing about your video is the pictures of your family. You can really tell how close your family is! The only suggestion I have is that some of the words go by to fast to read. It's a great video!
ReplyDeleteBy looking at your pictures and reading your words I can see that you are very close to your family. I am the same way my family is the most important thing to me. I really liked everything about your video. The pictures and words fit perfectly together and the music just makes that much better. I would slow some of the slides down because by the time I finished reading the words I missed the pictures and had to go back. Also on some of the slides it was hard to read a couple words because of the color. (this could just be because of my computer) This is a really good video, great job!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is you love to travel.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because it seems that your family is fairly large.
The best thing about your digital story is how strongly the importance of your family is portrayed.
One think you could change is..I found a couple of words hard to read for some reason (perhaps the background).
One thing I learned about you is...”you were adopted from Mexico.” We always swore my sister was adopted too.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because...you live in the city and I live in the country.
The best thing about your digital story is….the pictures. They are well suited for your poem.
One think you could change is......a few of the words were hard for me to read.
One thing I learned about you is that you played soccer just like me. Your family is similar to mine because my family always traveled to different vacation destinations.
ReplyDeleteThe best thing about your digital story is the song. I love it.
One thing you could change is that the first slide is hard to see.
One thing I learned about you played soccer and softball.
ReplyDeleteYour family is different than mine because I didn't play soccer or softball.
The best thing about your digital story is the great photos!
The color on your favorite team's names made them difficult to read. Other than that, don't change a thing!
One thing I learned about you is that you were very athletic growing up!
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar than mine because you all seem very close.
The best thing about your digital story is the details and wording of your poem. It flows very well!
One thing you could change in your video would be the introduction. I would add an introductory slide so it doesn't start right into your poem.